My computer

inspired by my computer

My computer is usually fast

One click I am there!

 

Today it’s given up the go,

It sits there going so slow!

 

The mouse has gone haywire,

It wont let me type!

 

Only one thing for it...

I pull the plug!

 

The screen flashes,

And then goes blank.

 

It stares accusingly at me,

So I turn it on...

 

It’s working at last!

But not for long!

Author's Note

he he as you might have guessed my computer was annoying me this morning

Reviews

[Freeminded]

I would smash the screen on this one if it didn't have one of the new fangled screens. And the tinernet is tormenting me.
Your poem is very good indeed...if you don't mind it has given me some inspirtation to write a computer poem...
I love the way you used personification- making the computer sound alive
Lovely- you are a talented writer

[rachylou]

computers are annoying :/

[SkinlessFrank]

Cute story Rach. I might have kicked it soundly.

[Sophster300]

Love it! Like how it relates to how annoying technology can actually be, I mean, arent these devices supposed to make our lives easier and yet end up making us more frustrated?! Honestly! :) Really good use of personification x

[Rae]

Haha! Life gives you lemons, make lemonade. Keep writing!!

[Dearantlers]

It's a really good poem, and I can completely relate. That's how my computer is too. You are a gifted poet!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice read, good old computers, can annoy you and get you mad, nice write!!!