Ocean

Tossing and turning

Madly whirling

An amazing place 

With all earth's grace

Running up the beach

Sliding down the sand

An amazing place

With all earth's grace

Author's Note

really random lol

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

Random maybe, but absolutely amazing. My favorite is "running up the beach/sliding down the sand" It just puts a picture in my head of someone running up the beach, losing momentum like the ocean, falling, and sliding back down. Really amazing poem, and I love to read your work.

[rachylou]

AWSOME

[Freeminded]

The rhyme works well- its obvious that your describing an ocean. Lovely

[Caitlin Woodley]

That is cwl i think my favourite poem that u have ridden that i hav read is the little bird poem but this one i would rate....