Little Bird

Little bird sitting in a tree

Little bird just look at me

 

We’re both alone

Both stuck on our own

 

Little bird sitting in a tree

Little bird just look at me

 

You sit there tweeting

I sit there writing

 

Friends we both shall be

Author's Note

wrote for a comp what do you think

Reviews

[Megan]

i love how simple this is :)
My favorite line is "you sit there tweeting/I sit there writing" It makes it sound as if that's both what you were made to do lol, like it's the most natural thing in the world and writing is obviously what you were meant to do cause this is awesome..keep up the good work!

[rachylou]

AWSOME

[The Scholar]

I love this! Incredible.
And i can't believe you like LOTR. I'm a Tolkien fan too, he's my greatest inspiration.

[Stella]

I loved how short and sweet this poem is!

[Kathryn]

The simple structure makes this a light and pleasurable read, and one I really enjoyed. I loved the symbolic friendship you showed through this, and the imagery you used was stunning. I can clearly picture a bird and a writer now :) Some more language featured could have been included, just to add deoth to the piece, but overall the effect was a light, upbeat poem that I really enjoyed :) Well done :)

[Sophster300]

It's really good! Short and effective...what competion did you enter? I love your use of rhyme and repetition :) x

[Dearantlers]

This is awesome. You are an amazing writer. And like Megan, I love the lines
"you sit there tweeting
I sit there writing"
I love that line. It's just perfect. Keep sending me read requests. I love em.

[Callista-Jade]

It's simple and adorable. I love it!

[Caitlin Woodley]

that is amazing how long did it take you to think of it i would never in my life have thought of that!!!

[deeps]

It's cute and wonderful.