Always second best

feelings i get at school

Yeah we’re friends

But not very close

‘Cause in the end

I’m second to everyone else.

Author's Note

short and sweet, well not really sweet but what do you think

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Yep, a lot like how I feel a bit back when I had this friend who would just come to me with her problems and then leave once she got her frustration out...kind of annoying, because whenever she'd find something better she doesn't talk to me anymore....I do suggest that if you are going to put a period on your last phrase, you may want to add some punctuation to all the other phrases as well.

[rae52]

when i'm annoyed i tend to get lazy but thanks

[Rose of Gondor]

lol, same with me. :D I hope things get better!

[Jetta Zippora]

A sad but honest write. Well written and heartfelt. :)

[Heromen Selena]

Short but not at all sweet :P It's actually really sad. I'm not sure if this applies to you but regardless everyone gets to make their own shining moment in their lives :) Great job.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Says a lot does this poem..seconf best does suck...always wanna be someones first choice...
enjoyed thoroughly :)

[Soul Fire]

Bittersweet.

[MOON]

Poignant well expressed in such a few lines.

[rae52]

it's not hard to express real feelings not when it happens over and over