Short Sentiment

When I look at them,

I see nothing.

When I look at you,

I see galaxies. 

Author's Note

It's short, I know, but it was just a thought I had. Review if you'd like, I review back.

Reviews

[DeBloyce]

Short and perfect. Sometimes that's all that's needed

[Wolfwind Words]

An enjoyable and lovely piece. It keeps things simple and sweet and it speaks of something that most everyone has seen in one person at some point.
And in each case we pray there are no stray black holes looming in the center of those galaxies... =D

Thanks for sharing!
Aaron

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. A perfect poem for love. When we see the galaxies in our lover's eyes. We know the sweetness of paradise. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[B]

That is all a woman could ask for

[MySecretMuse]

Lol I'm the woman XD but thank you for your review!!

[B]

I meant that all one could ask for as a woman to see another in this way lol

[Ruth]

Beautiful! From the heart and intense...really like this :)

[Jesse W.]

Galaxies. Very good poem, short but sweet. Excellent work.

[MySecretMuse]

Thanks jesse!!

[The Diamond Effect]

Short, sweet, and simple.

[MySecretMuse]

Thank you for your review!!

[alifeacoustic]

Packs a punch and says more than such a short piece should. There is always one star that we see shining brightest. Great job.

[MySecretMuse]

Thank you so much!!

[Inject Positivity]

Are you serious? I don't think the thoughts that your 'short' poem producing are short, it is speaking so much more than the poem looks like....The last word 'galaxies' made it amazing....Thought provoking and sweet.....Full ratings!!!

[MySecretMuse]

Thank you so much!! You've been such a big help to me on wc and I've only been here a few days haha thank you!!