An enjoyable and lovely piece. It keeps things simple and sweet and it speaks of something that most everyone has seen in one person at some point.
And in each case we pray there are no stray black holes looming in the center of those galaxies... =D
Beautiful. A perfect poem for love. When we see the galaxies in our lover's eyes. We know the sweetness of paradise. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Are you serious? I don't think the thoughts that your 'short' poem producing are short, it is speaking so much more than the poem looks like....The last word 'galaxies' made it amazing....Thought provoking and sweet.....Full ratings!!!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
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