A Summer Evening's Play

Her skin opened and breathed with the lilac air- 

filling her lungs with flowers and sweet times, 

Painted lights, artistically smooth, careful not to disturb the peace- 

it glowed a lite Periwinkle- 

The color of her Mother's favorite wool sweater

Sister chased the bumble bees-

 in the distance, the petals of her Sunflower locks intertwined with the

 Fields of Gold

The Sun balanced HerSelf on the peaks of the Mountains- 

Power- 

Watching as Life Sloooows;

 Poetic Symphonies of the evening  begin playing from the old record player- 

stuttering- searching for a few missing notes;

 A fluttering butterfly, 

A drifting cloud,

 The Oak standing free and patient, 

And, 

The summer breeze sneaking thru Her window to steal a secret kiss

Fireflies dancing in the wind- 

the air was as light as the scent that began this 

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Reviews

[softlyfall]

Just wonderful. Unique beautiful and occasionally personalized imagery, phrased extremely well. Interesting that you made the sun female, usually the sun i make and the moon female. That being said, I applaud you for that and it is in perfect keeping with your ingenuity.