The internal rival

The internal rival

A Poem by Rachel-M.

The fight that happens every day,
the chance of good,
the hope of bad,
the mindset you will have,
will you see the world for it's evil,
or for it's good,
the fight will happen, 
there is no "if",
you can't escape the darkness fully,
or the light for that matter,
but in all you will be alright,
though the sweat drips down tour face and the taste of salt is undeniable,
you will survive.

© 2016 Rachel-M.


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hi
nice poem,and yes the fight will happen,so you need to be strong.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you, it means a lot to hear that, please keep reading and I'll keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Powerful, honest and true words. We shall have good and bad days. Need to keep going forward. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to powerful ending. Thank you Rachel for sharing your excellent poetry.
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Posted 8 Years Ago



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