The colors of life and beyond part 1

The colors of life and beyond part 1

A Poem by Rachel-M.

Heaven is white and gold
It sounds like a choir
It tastes like bread
It smells like nature
It looks bright and light
It makes me fell joyful

© 2016 Rachel-M.


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hi
ok true i think and i agree,to me if the poem was long it would almost chage the feel so good thing it was short

Posted 8 Years Ago


May these colors of joy be entitled to us.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed the poem. Create beautiful and hopeful place. You made Heaven a worthwhile journey. Thank you Rachel for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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What to say, um, well I love red and blue, I'm always excited for a new anime, and I love reading. more..

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A Poem by Rachel-M.