Stardust

Have you seen the

Flying dolphins

Their psychopathic ramblings

Keep me up at night

Here they hurtle

Into tangled seas

Confusing self with sand

These crashing waves

Were my dreams

Where who I was

Was who I was

So shut me out of body

Of state

Of mind

And time 

Takes time

But this time

Time hangs

In shattered form

Like the sprinkled glass

Littered across 

The other side of sky

Reviews

[Stephen]

Lovely poem..it's a verse of your heart. What a beautiful comparison of dolphin with you! Yes ... dolphins flying up from the fathoms of the oceans and you too wished to get build up in lonely nights by someone to quench the fire of love...like a dolphin quenches her desires drinking the drops of coldness, you wished to have some warmth drinking it with hotness...lovely poem. It's a way of your mind. Well done once again for the beautiful poem.

[Rachel Landes]

Thank you, Namaste.

[Stephen]

Your welcome ..but what's that "Namaste?"

[Rachel Landes]

Namaste: "I bow to the God within you", or "The Spirit within me salutes the Spirit in you" - a knowing that we are all made from the same One Divine Consciousness.

[Melissa S]

I really loved the repetition in this poem! And the alliteration is wonderful. The only thing I have an issue with (with is totally a personal preference) is that I need punctuation. Without punctuation I don't stop at the correct pauses and it trips me up. But if this is the writing style you enjoy, awesome and stick to it! I think my favorite part was the four lines with the word "time". The repetition just added so much more to the poem. Thank you for sharing :)

[Rachel Landes]

Hmm. There aren't meant to be pauses, its meant to be read straight through. Namaste.