-1

go ahead 

zombify me

make me 

no longer

me

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow Rachel! Great work...seriously. It's the first of yours I've read, but it's brevity and intensity are quite expressive. And it could be about many things, but seems to be open to the reader's interpretation.

My first impression is that the speaker is referring to someone with whom she's no longer in a relationship, or to a person (or group of people) that don't understand her. Even if it's not, it really seems to have a lot of depth.

And the title, "-1," is perfect too. It gets the point across in just two characters, without saying any more. I love it!

[Rachel Landes]

Thank you, Namaste.

[Eric Pudalov]

Namaste. (Or as the Jewish people would say, "Shalom!")

[Rachel Landes]

Ha, Ha, yeah I know. I'm jewish.

[Eric Pudalov]

Aha, awesome!! Me too.

[Rachel Landes]

Haha awesomeee. Where bouts are you in the world?

[Eric Pudalov]

I'm in Atlanta, GA (in the city part). It's a cool place - full of inspiration, I think. How about you?

[Rachel Landes]

I'm in Wisconsin for now, a few weeks, maybe more. That's cool. Atlanta sounds cool. You on Facebook?

[Eric Pudalov]

Yes, I am, as a matter of fact. You can search for me under the same name. :-)

[kublakhan27]

You've said so much in so few words...the interpretative possibilities are endless...very cool :)

[Rachel Landes]

namaste, thank you :) would love to hear what you think of the newest poem i uploaded, 212 degrees?

[Rachel Landes]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/rachellandes811/1399348/

[stars are far]

yeah please.. me tooo.. i would love it..
well done :)

[Rachel Landes]

Love and Light. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Hmm quirky, being zombified could be good or bad I guess...sometimes we're better when we just let go and let the forces that be awaken our spirit....

[Rachel Landes]

Namaste. Thank you.