Love Games

The thoughts in my head, spinning around like an over powered roller coaster, spinning out of control. Could it be you are playing games with my heart? Enough already I can't take no more, I'm confused I'm trying to meet you in the middle when you don't care to move an inch. I can give you no more chances if you continue not to try. Here's you'r last chance make up you'r mind.

Author's Note

fuck u u hoe i dont want u bac

Reviews

[chaotic katie]

i like how you compared your thoughts to an overpowered rollar coaster this poem is really good and i think a lot of people can relate to it nice job keep writing :)
ily

[Mickey]

I really liked it :)

[JenLyn]

I like this poem but for me it would read better if it were in a different form, maybe if you broke it up into stanzas. The paragraph form just makes it a little difficult to read and in my opinion it reads more like a story or a love letter. Overall the poem was nice though, it flowed well and the rhyme wasn't forced. Keep it up! :)

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Very deep and powerful though its very short I enjoyed it very much! Keep writing!
Oh and if you dont like writing y be on here! This is something to take very seriously.

[Matthew J. Price]

awesome!

[chaotic katie]

love it