Fiction

Fiction

A Poem by rachel
"

Sometimes they feel better than reality

"

These words have made me laugh; made me cry

Made me clap the covers shut mid-sentence

And slam the novel down in anger.

 

This fabrication, delicately written on off-white pages

Feels more like reality than reality does.

           -  It’s much easier to believe fiction sometimes.

 

The solid things, the tangible things

Tell me tidbits of truth I’d rather deny.

They struggle to meet my gaze.

 

But I consciously shift away

Breathe in the delicious cent of lies

And find something real after all

In words that can’t possibly be true.

 

© 2009 rachel


Author's Note

rachel
I was inspired to write this after I literally threw a book across my bed in anger - It's a fictional story, but it struck me then that the words had more impact on my emotions than reality. I tend to push away my REAL drama but become so easily self-absorbed in fantasies. ....I feel the wording needs more editing - Im open to suggestions on this piece.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

i really liked it. i was wobdering if you could read my first piece becasue its my first time on here. thanks, and tellme what you think

Posted 12 Years Ago


awesome..i have no suggestion because i kno my poems suck

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe

Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Stats

135 Views
2 Reviews
Added on January 14, 2009
Last Updated on January 14, 2009

Author

rachel
rachel

NM



About
I work in the Ammo unit for the United States Air Force. I absolutely love it, but my goal is to cross train into Intelligence some day. I work pretty much all the time, so finding the time and energy.. more..

Writing
chapter chapter

A Story by rachel


Insanity Insanity

A Poem by rachel