quick

The moon has lost its glory, 

The sea has lost her life, 

The sun has lost its heat,

and I can’t see the light.

My mind has lost the war,

My body has lost the fight,

My man has won the battle, 

and I have lost my might. 

My past has lost all meaning,

My chest so cold and tight, 

My eyes have lost their vision,

Could I see heaven tonight? 

Reviews

[charlotte]

hello sugarandsap . i like this , you really give the feel that this person feels very weak and defeated . good piece of writing :-)