Writing Salon - Eyes

An exercise for Creative Writing called a Salon. Our objective was simply to write anything with the word, "eyes."

Your eyes first drew me in

Full of laughter, mischief, the person within

Next, your smile, or rather your grin

It shows your love of life, not held in

The way your hold yourself,

Confident, comfortable in your skin

How you talk, engaged, interesting

Always with your two cents to put in

Your personality, so in control

Intelligent, responsible, you don’t think fun is a sin

In other words, you’re perfect

From your attitude to that grin

The way you go through life with a smile

Even though you have no real body to live in

You’re a character in my story

My masterpiece, my work of art

You’re the life of the fiction

Though you’ll never have a real heart

Such a shame you’re confined to these pages

But I’ll give you power, I promise that

You will live in the real world

I’ll make you as big as the Cat in the Hat

I owe you that

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[darkgurl]

I'll make you as big as the Cat in the Hat
I owe you that

Awesome line here, this is a well expressed write full of angression....Kim