List of Complaints

rhyming sounds so corny

i'm sitting at home

i hate being alone

my boyfriend hurt my feelings, sometimes he's so blunt

my sister is screaming because she didn't get what she wants

my blister is throbbing

my mother is sobbing

i'm cold

i don't speak and i feel old

i fell down the stairs

we just weren't prepared

losing hope in my fate

i'm always late

i'm tired

i'm exasperated

my right eye crosses when i focus

i feel dumb when i dont cuss

i have split ends that dont listen

he rolls his eyes when i dont kiss him

i hate the way i look in the morning and at night

i just feel downright depressed but i realize despite

my problems and complaints and bitching and moaning

there's people out there who have bigger problems than self-loathing

so when i sit back and look at my list

it's really not that much, i don't know why i'm so pissed

the girls that complain about their body makeup and hair

should take a step back, stop being vain, and try not to care

maybe we should complain about things that matter

about wars without cause and lives that are shattered

 

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

Everything just flowed really well, it was great! :]

[Silvario]

wow, this is really good. a well penned piece with a strong message. i enjoyed the fast paced tempo and your word choice here is superb.

well done indeed :)