I am not

I am not

A Poem by A hare off

I am not who you think I am

I am not who you thought I'd be

I am not who you wished I were 

I am not


I am a latitude line

on a folded map

intersecting on a crease,

tossed in a drawer

and forgotten


I am that man


The man I am, I am not

© 2018 A hare off


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Behind the mask we choose to hide yet there are those who can see!

Posted 6 Years Ago


A hare off

6 Years Ago

Yes, usually ourselves. Thank you Kitty
great play on words and images. A very strong piece of poetry indeed. I hope many more of us discover you. Welcome to the cafe.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

my pleasure
Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

a great picture of this would be some sort of old mask
A hare off

6 Years Ago

Perhaps the one I seem to wear. :)
Do we ever really know another human being fully? I don't think so. I really like this line " I am a latitude line on a folded map intersecting on a crease"....fantastic! Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


A hare off

6 Years Ago

Do we ever really know ourselves? Many thank yous Lydia.
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

If we are honest with ourselves, yes.
A hare off

6 Years Ago

Touche, nicely stated
I feel this one for sure.
we are what we are and not what others believe we are
and sometimes we have no clue who we are
at least your coordinates are marked on that crease in the map, should you ever need to find yourself
I liked your poem, and welcome

Posted 6 Years Ago


A hare off

6 Years Ago

Who I am is a question that I have yet to answer and might not ever. Some feel they know, but I do n.. read more
Papaya

6 Years Ago

you're welcome
i yam i'm not I AM! ;) fun to read with a deeper vein running through ... i saw a review you left on emmajoy's page and thought i would stop by .. i read you are new .. so welcome to the Cafe' ..
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A hare off

6 Years Ago

Many thanks for the warm welcome.

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I'm Anthony, but my friends call me A hare off - long story for another time. I hope a few will enjoy some of what I write. I am from the northeast U.S. more..

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