A humble request...

Behind the mask of satisfaction that you  wear...
Isn't there a pain??...
You hear it all what others say..
What do u think u gain??
What is it that u fear,
Is it what u see?...
Or is it what u hear...?

For once, defy common belief
Aren't u tired,

Get yourself some relief..
'Cause calmness isn't coming soon...
A word that you'll feel
Once in a blue moon...
So let our fantasies go wild
Let us bring out the jubilant child...
Now's the time,
Use your creative hands
To carve the castle of joy out of sand...

Step out of the wall
Workout a true smile
Take my hand before u fall...
Walk with me a soulful mile...!!

Reviews

[Becca Bishop]

Great job, but it's a bit annoying how you switch from saying "u" to "you". I love the imagery in the piece, especially the lines "use your creative hands/ To carve a castle of joy out of sand..." Beautiful work and keep it up!

[Knight, not a Saint]

Thank you for reviewing this!!!....
Actually you & u switch is unintentional & i know i've developed a bad habit thanx to facebook!!!....thanx to u fr pointing it out specifically....this will certainly be avoided!!....thanx again!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Beautifully worked ! Loved it :)

[Knight, not a Saint]

Thank you for the first ever review on my writing!!...
Great to know you liked it!!....thank you!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Your most welcome