Snow on the Sun

You're a quality girl, You deserve quality time
But out of all the girls in the world I wish you were mine...
I see your face in the clouds,
I hear your voice in my dreams
Don't bother asking me how,
just hold my hand, hold my hand and sing:
Why is it every time i stare at the stars they all turn gray?
It's 'cause they simply cannot compare to your beautiful face
How could my life speed up,
while my heart beats slow?
You can make a walk on the sun feel just like a day in the snow, In the Snow...
You're a beautiful girl, You deserve a beautiful life
Out of all the lives you could share,
Why not mine?
We can stare at the clouds
We can dance all night in my dreams
Don't bother asking me how,
just hold my hand, hold my hand and sing:
Why is it every time i stare at the stars they all turn gray?
It's 'cause they simply cannot compare to your beautiful face
How could my life speed up,
while my heart beats slow?
You can make a walk on the sun feel just like a day in the snow, In the Snow...
If love had never existed,
then i would show much persistence,
in cutting my chest and releasing my heart, my heart, my heart
for you!
Death would not let us part, (for you)
as long as you're holding my Heart...My heart....My heart....
You're a quality girl, You deserve a beautiful life,
out of all the girls in the world,
I wish you were mine.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The flow of words were very good. I like the description and the story in the words. Your words are true. To get a woman of quality. Need to treat her with kindness and respect. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote