laura

Laura is a 'beautiful' baby fish,

I called her baby fishy,

She swam around,

And fell to the ground.

 

She started to float,

Flipped upside down,

My 'beautiful' fishy,

Is a dead fishy now.

 

I used my net,

She was easy to catch,

For she didnt move,

And she couldnt go back.

 

I carried her out,

in the little green net,

Oh baby fishy,

Another one i will get.

 

Goodbye my dead fish,

I love you too,

Rest in peace,

In the loo.

Reviews

[Maggie]

Everytime I bought a goldfish it died...I think this poem is sort of funny, though.

[Tasha]

This was really nice. :)

[Linear]

Oh my this brought a smile to my face, even a chuckle..........really good work, in fact it shall enter my favorites

[BlueberryKisses]

:L 'I called her baby fishy' made me laugh so much :') great poem x

[£15 + A S**t BJ]

THIS CERTAINLY HAS THE X FACTOR :D :D :D

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

xD LMFAO :')

[LoopyLoo]

Thats actually really good :-) It made me laugh :-)

[terisa green]

that is really nice :)