laura
A Poem by
Sophie Titch
Laura is a 'beautiful' baby fish,
I called her baby fishy,
She swam around,
And fell to the ground.
She started to float,
Flipped upside down,
My 'beautiful' fishy,
Is a dead fishy now.
I used my net,
She was easy to catch,
For she didnt move,
And she couldnt go back.
I carried her out,
in the little green net,
Oh baby fishy,
Another one i will get.
Goodbye my dead fish,
I love you too,
Rest in peace,
In the loo.
© 2011 Sophie Titch
Reviews
haha i liked it!! like it was wrote by a child but in a good way :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
i picked this poem cause my mama is named laura i was surprised how innocent and warm hearted it is even it's about death few people can captured that
Posted 13 Years Ago
i picked this poem cause my mama is named laura i was surprised how innocent and warm hearted it is even it's about death few people can captured that
I know it's meant to be sad, but I found it quite child-like and humorous, mainly because of that last stanza. I guess it is easy for someone to say goodbye to a fish, because as you say, you can always get another one, but nice to see a slightly lighter side to death, whether intentional or not :P
Posted 13 Years Ago
I know it's meant to be sad, but I found it quite child-like and humorous, mainly because of that last stanza. I guess it is easy for someone to say goodbye to a fish, because as you say, you can always get another one, but nice to see a slightly lighter side to death, whether intentional or not :P
Lovely, I feel like this poem is used to show more than innocence, but of moving on to? Anyway, very lovely.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lovely, I feel like this poem is used to show more than innocence, but of moving on to? Anyway, very lovely.
this was just lovely :) I really enjoyed it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
this was just lovely :) I really enjoyed it.
A brilliant poem! After reading your poem, I miss my goldfish Bubble too. I really love animals same as you.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A brilliant poem! After reading your poem, I miss my goldfish Bubble too. I really love animals same as you.
Brilliant!! x
Posted 13 Years Ago
Brilliant!! x
haha laura is my friend, shes not dead, and shes a human! lol it was just a bit of fun :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
haha laura is my friend, shes not dead, and shes a human! lol it was just a bit of fun :)
Oh my Gosh... You are so heartless... How her soul will rest in peace..in th loo...? And you threw your baby fish in the LOO....??
Well to be very honest ..this is the best among all..If we ignore the ending...Coz i love animals a lot...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oh my Gosh... You are so heartless... How her soul will rest in peace..in th loo...? And you threw your baby fish in the LOO....??
Well to be very honest ..this is the best among all..If we ignore the ending...Coz i love animals a lot...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I miss my goldfish called Chips as well : (
Posted 13 Years Ago
I miss my goldfish called Chips as well : (
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Sophie Titch Darlington, England, United Kingdom
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Im Sophie, im 15, im not into poetry that much, but its a fun thing to do, so i write it sometimes.
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