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this life is like a butterfly,

flying by.

 

for a butterfly nothing matters,

they eat, sleep, and breath,

nothing puts them down,

but the others.

 

yes other butterflies say your ugly,

but thats not your fault,

you were born this way.

 

caterpillars are not very pretty,

they arnt very beautiful,

but they are amazing,

for they are made the way they are,

by a higher power.

 

so love all that is,

nature,

life,

and love.

 

 

Author's Note

hi just comment :D

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

The poem has potential but you didn't quite reach it. The poem seem haphazardly thrown together without rhyme or reason. It has no flow and doesn't hold my attention. It's not a bad poem it just isn't as good as it could be. :D

[LoopyLoo]

Good Job. :-)

[Dilan Gray]

I love the metaphor of the butterfly. I think it is so great. Nice simple poem. Great job.

[Sam Severn]

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! So simple, so supremely heartfelt, so wise, so beautiful! ㋡

[sushi]

Nice write. Thanks for sharing.

['CrashUrgency']

Like it :) xxx

[Sophie Titch]

thankyou x

[typingaway]

This is actually great, well done!(: