The hospital vist

The hall was clean, quiet, it felt wrong.

So much pain surge through the walls.

Agony was thick in the air, I felt it. Why was it was so quiet, so calm?

I breathed in, the air tasted wrong, sour, I hated the whole place.

The Palace of pain. The hospital

Reviews

[Goat]

Oh my gosh! I'm so glad someone shares my view on this! I can't stand hospitals, the smell of medicine and all the people there in agony! Nice write, it is a great poem!