Green Flowers

Faded love

What a beautiful sight you maybe
But you still have no color
Your petals
Fades the moment I touch......
Dies the moment I see........

Reviews

[Paul]

Documentation
4/6/18
3:42 PM U.S. CST
"My Review of Green Flowers by queenfay, A Fellow Writer's Café Author"
On The PB!

Hey, queenfay

This reminds me of things I've been thinking and writing about, lately. Some of you sure get me to think about different things. I'm thinking legitimacy when I read your work, and healthy motivation, as well.

You don't seem to be leaning towards Retail Sausage Head with this.

Then, I think about the emotional cootie thing that some people have and how it catches some of us in a zany crossfire, only to get screwed by the catcher's mitt crowd.

Yeah, don't take this the wrong way. but I think your work is "Table Talk Poetry." Nothing wrong with that, as I love to gab and review, at the same time, but then again, a lot of you know this...

Have a Great Day, queenfay!

PB Jacobs