poem

poem, poem,poem,

im not too good at thee,

but it is a passion that i have,

and with it i will be.

 

poems are my love,

i wtrite them all the time,

i have none with me atm

but its still not a crime!!

Author's Note

yey im not good at all lmao

Reviews

[Tinasha LaRayé]

keep your confidence up girlie! this is clever and sweet! ;o) Every rose starts as a seed...then planted, watered, nurtured...and soon it grows and blooms. If the desire is there and the hunger - true hunger - then you will one day see the fruits of your labor by looking back to this poem and seeing where you started and where you currently stand at that time. Read up about styles, rules, formats, story-telling methods, etc. You're going to be great! And so young too? No, you're going to be amazing!!!! Just keep writing...just keep writing! ;o)

[terisa green]

well done really good i like this :)

[terisa green]

amazing :)

[Sukriti Suki]

there is no definition about who is good at poetry and who is not...Poetry is at its best when you feel better/ expressed after writing it...not bad for a start I must say.

[Rossen]

you are good, just pour your real you in to each line
give some of your essence away and It will come back
more then you gave, let your emotions flow...
you are good!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

write*