Stone

When does a stone break?
When does its hardness change?
Before it becomes soft as sand
How many times was it
Beaten by waves?

How much heat pressed aganst the cold
Until sharp cracks formed on the mold?
How much biting wind harshly blew
To slice out the gaps that we look through?

And how long did the stone need to melt
Until its walled-out pain was felt?

Reviews

[A. Amos]

When does a stone break?
When does its hardness change?
Before it becomes soft as sand
How many times was it
Beaten by waves?

Great write and above lines were killer...good job my friend

[Qavah Simchah]

Thank you! That's the first time anything I've written has ben described as "killer"! I'm so glad you liked that part :D

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend and will keep reading your work...

[Qavah Simchah]

Thanks! I'll be sure and return the favor

[A. Amos]

Don't worry about that and you're most welcome...

[Roger Turgeon]

Like many of your writings, nature is a reflection of ourselves causing us to review our own melting and breaking points.

[Qavah Simchah]

Yes it is! Thanks :)