Don't Sleep

In the night
In the quiet
Have a fight
Start the riot

Feelings become fists
And beat against my head
Memories are cold tears
Bleeding on my bed

And I still hear you
And I still feel
Feel my open wounds
Is love real?

Reviews

[Neon]

A very rhythmic poem. Nice work. Keep on.

[Qavah Simchah]

Thanks so much!

[Sami Khalil]

"And I still hear you
And I still feel
Feel my open wounds
Is love real?"

A question that has been asked for centuries...Bravo

[Qavah Simchah]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................