The rainy myth

The rainy myth

A Poem by Muhammad Qasim
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personally, this seems to be my best work till now inspired by certain thoughts at a certain place...

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Among the myths soo many
One about a penny

FRom the rainy sky
Believe me.. Not a lie
From the rainy sky
Among the many drops of rain
One evily laughing.. Said hi
Sliding down the crane..on the ground till going down the drain
Only hi, before death, not even a bye

In the drain
It went through
From a tube, that seemed new
Like it had a brain

Seeping through a joint
At a certain unexpected point

Diving like a spy
Many would suprisingly shout "Oh my"

Along the pipe.. Ravish and old
Super fast.. It was bold

Sliding upon an uneven stack of freezed grease
It went and creased

At a totally unexpected point
In the old Wall
Where many bricks came to a joint
There was hole

Flying through
No attention it drew

Straight down
In the mouth of that innocent prisoner on death's row
Wearing a teared gown
As now.. Shouted all the black crows

His Throat wettened enough
His two days survival.. No longer a bluff

His entire clan
That made a single rescue plan

In a day more
As the lion.. Somewhere made a roar

His life
Along his wife

He had it all back
Revealing his name... Was jack
Everything.. He had packed
Nothing then he lacked

They were all gone
Never knowing..his life was an extended loan!!



© 2013 Muhammad Qasim


Author's Note

Muhammad Qasim
Kindly all you readers out there, review with all you have, your honest opinions here will make my future works better, Thanks :)

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love this! i like the perspective you took and the concept of how things fit together to make life happen

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

yeah, it was clear to me :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

thts nice :) seriously means a lot
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

:)
Explain this. I don't get it :/
I like this line though, "Only hi, before death, not even a bye."

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

dats true :) but not everyone follows it and the few who does.. usually people take it offensive as .. read more
Moniba

11 Years Ago

which is wrong.
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

yeap it is but that is just how we humans think!

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Added on February 17, 2013
Last Updated on February 17, 2013
Tags: myth, loan, life, prison, rain

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Muhammad Qasim
Muhammad Qasim

London, United Kingdom



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