love..Never again

just something i wrote as a comeback!

The love i so called my own 
Now gone 

All the way 
Never to sway 
It's at stay 
At that loveless bay 

Every coming day 
I dream as i lay 

Broken dreams 
In many countless reams 

My broken heart in pain 
Never again to gain 
Love .. That goes down the drain 
Worst than to lie under a train 

Over thinking brain 
Broken by the pain 

Once broken 
If broken 
then 
Never again 
Never again!!

Reviews

[Moniba]

Not bad... But not mind-blowing either.

[Muhammad Qasim]

okay! just see it in the sense of glass half full....no matter how many negative points it may have...just see the oneZ that are good!! :)

[Moniba]

mhmm. But it's not good to ignore the faults either ;)

[Muhammad Qasim]

true but being that honest really doesn't help since all PakiZ are soooo....u know

[Moniba]

No they're NOT!!!

[Moniba]

What exactly did you mean?

[Muhammad Qasim]

i mean like...in fsd...they are unaware of things and act kimda paindu all the tym!! they have this ego not to let anyone else get ahead n all...no offence

[Moniba]

ahan... i'm not gonna say anything. None taken.

[Muhammad Qasim]

okay!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

QASIM!! it is great piece..
last stanza has no comparison... :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

thank you! Ibrahim for the wonderful review :D
yaar mjhe aik aur bnda mila hai jo computer ka shoqeen hai sahi wala

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

kon hai wo?

[Muhammad Qasim]

beacon se hai...usama naam hai! kisi tym plan bna mil wadu ga

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

chal ok..
banata hain plan..
kch kia hua hai us ne koi certification wagera?

[Muhammad Qasim]

language most likely kre ga in holidays..maina bhi saath hi krleni hau!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

ahan sai hai..
language ka faidha hai...

[Muhammad Qasim]

programming languages....c++ wagera

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

C++ ache hai..
is main buhat kch develop hota hai

[Muhammad Qasim]

pta hai!! tu kahan pohncha hai ??

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

main kahain nai..
tym he nai de hota ..
tu abi tu kch nai kia main ne ..

[Muhammad Qasim]

acha....paper de kr phr chutio mai krle ga akathe hi!!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

han kr lai gain :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

oka!!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

aur studies kasa chal rhi hain?

[Muhammad Qasim]

achi chl rahi hai

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

good hai :P