smile! : (

smile! : (

A Poem by Muhammad Qasim
"

inspired by the writing of a friend!

"

A hint of sadness
Behind that .. Smile

That smile
With those desperate eyes

That smile
Keeping those tears at bay

It was a smile
But only a smile

With emptiness behind
That smile

Had more heat
Than the sun

That smile
Longer than a mile

But empty 
It was

That smile
With nothing behind
But sadness

Yet that smile
Kept on smiling!! : ))

© 2012 Muhammad Qasim


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I think we all do this from time to time. Some seem to always keep the front. It is a mixed blessing... Great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you!! It is truly a blessing
awww this is soo cute im going to shelf this!!! by the way who inspired this

Posted 12 Years Ago


dunnia

12 Years Ago

haha ur not funny dont forget im older than u heheheh
dunnia

12 Years Ago

and u have to tell me XD i tell u everything ...i think
Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Ahem ahem .. I still haven't forgotten that something u didn't tell me!!
well described :)
fab

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Shukria (thank you)
Muhammad Ibraheem

12 Years Ago

MP :)
I like how this poem flow. Well written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you : )
This is sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on November 9, 2012
Last Updated on November 9, 2012
Tags: Smile, Sadness, Emptiness

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Muhammad Qasim
Muhammad Qasim

London, United Kingdom



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