Sometimes, that's all it takes :) a gorgeous write, very profound. Just keep swimming, as Dory :D would say, no matter what. love this :) ~em
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
don't no who dory is but thank you :D
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from Finding Nemo? sorry, I kinda assume that because it's my favorite movie evryone's seen it... yo.. read morefrom Finding Nemo? sorry, I kinda assume that because it's my favorite movie evryone's seen it... you're welcome :)
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~em XP
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oooh haha...i have seen the movie..being the movie lover i am but it was way in the past when it was.. read moreoooh haha...i have seen the movie..being the movie lover i am but it was way in the past when it was first released...so fingers crossed when it comes to remembering names!!
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ahh okay. I get that way too :) well, then i still have yet to meet a person who hasn't seen the mov.. read moreahh okay. I get that way too :) well, then i still have yet to meet a person who hasn't seen the movie :D
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i am pretty sure i know many who hasn't seen it...sucks being the only movie lover in the group (in .. read morei am pretty sure i know many who hasn't seen it...sucks being the only movie lover in the group (in my class)
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D8 i'm so sorry for you... ~em
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its alrite....i am used to it :D so really doesnt matter
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well that's good. Movies are my favorite hobby, so you can always talk to me about them if you want .. read morewell that's good. Movies are my favorite hobby, so you can always talk to me about them if you want to :D
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finally...someone like mee :) hmm so other than finding nemo which movie do u like... i really liked.. read morefinally...someone like mee :) hmm so other than finding nemo which movie do u like... i really liked "the odd life of timothy green" awesome movie and also "lifr of pi"
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"life of pi"*
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I love the Odd Life of Timothy Green!! I haven't seen Life of Pi yet :C but i will soon! I really re.. read moreI love the Odd Life of Timothy Green!! I haven't seen Life of Pi yet :C but i will soon! I really really liked Prometheus, and I'm a sucker for all the animated movies like Brave and Hotel Transylvania.
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yea...odd life of timothy is actually superb and life of pi is slow at starting but rocks midwhile p.. read moreyea...odd life of timothy is actually superb and life of pi is slow at starting but rocks midwhile prometheous is also good...u shud see aliens...the parrdirected by james cameron...its old but epic and i like animated as well and hotel transylvania is way better than brave!! hehe see i have seen all of these movies
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yes it definitely is (hotel transylvania to brave)!! I'll have to look up aliens...do you like horro.. read moreyes it definitely is (hotel transylvania to brave)!! I'll have to look up aliens...do you like horror movies? I love Stephen King movies. Have you seen In the Mouth of Madness?
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i like any sort of movies as long as they have a good story line...n nope...haven't seen it but now .. read morei like any sort of movies as long as they have a good story line...n nope...haven't seen it but now i will...ill let u know my views on the movie :)
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lol I haven't seen it yet either! I read some pretty mixed reviews on it, and I want to see it... i .. read morelol I haven't seen it yet either! I read some pretty mixed reviews on it, and I want to see it... i think it's pretty old though because I haven't been able to find it in movie stores yet :P
I love the idea behind this poem, and you had some promising lines. My favorite being,
"That smile
Had more heat
Than the sun"
When you wrote this, you were really saying something. The smile has anger behind it, and defied all science behind an actual smile. You should have played more off of that for sure!
Nice write (:
i am glad you found something great in this peace :) ..... and i tried to keep the length short cuz .. read morei am glad you found something great in this peace :) ..... and i tried to keep the length short cuz one thing i have seen is.....you open a poem .. see the length ...then read sooo
n Thank you for the review :D
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Hahaha! This is true for some people, but you shouldn't let that limit you!
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hmmmm....i don't agree much with others but i will here...u have a point : )
very profound, written with simplistic eloquence that flows, heart-felt poem most can relate to. thanks for sharing and your kind review on "sshh" - keep writing :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you and it was my pleasure to be able to review such a marvelous penned poem!!
Take car.. read moreThank you and it was my pleasure to be able to review such a marvelous penned poem!!
Take care
Qasim
12 Years Ago
thank you, you are far too sweet, for i don't even like that poem "sshh" or prose, it was just somet.. read morethank you, you are far too sweet, for i don't even like that poem "sshh" or prose, it was just something i was writing on my f.b. status three months ago, never thought it was anything special, just thought i'd share it on here, i almost hid it, in fact. Namaste!
it's easy for few people to keep up that fake smile.and i think that it's a sign of their bravery.to even smile in that difficult situation..so what if it's fake.......there so many things that are fake in this world!!!!!
i like the desperate feel of the poem and the way you penned it is really very appreciable........the message is so pure
thanks for sharing it with us:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
But all those fake things hurt you for not being able to share .. And thank you!!