The boon toon

Tried to only use rhyme's at the end

Above the moon
I saw a toon
His name boon
A little after noon

He swiftly flew
Just as he beautifully drew
And
He knew
How to make brew

It was still night
On the dark side .. No sun light
It was not bright

He danced Slow
As the craters blow

He soundly sang
As the drum's went bang

The sun came in view
The darkness left very few

He gave me a lace
Told me to keep it brace

Then i woke
First Drank a coke

Scolded by mum
I solved my maths sum

Trying to remember my dream anew
I found a lace .. In my pocket that i checked through!!!

Reviews

[The dark story]

that was...hahhahahahahahahaha....i've just enjoyed reading it and i won't mind reading it again......it's really sweet.and i don't know what was thieir in your mind when you wrote it..but i liked ii...especially the rhyming scheme.....

[Muhammad Qasim]

Haha .. Is apni tarah ke ache se review ke lia thank you .. i just tried to use rhymes at the end and this came out of it!! : ) and if this poem can makesomeone laugh even for a moment .. then its more than enough!! : )

[The dark story]

yeah.that's true what you said in your last line...it's not that easy to make someone laugh from heir heart as it seems to be.....ofof mr. philosopher.kya baat hai.itni achi philosoohy kaha se laie:P :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

hehe .. i am a natural philosopher .. dont u know!

[The dark story]

ohhhoh.eighth wonder of the world........Muhammed Qasim...the great natural philosopher!!!!!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

ninth wonder .. my friend became the 8th a long time ago :P and thank you for that wonderful compliment!! melted my heart like choclate .. ohh what if i end up eating it : (

[RachelReaper]

this was just so cute I found myself smiling all the way through.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Smilimg is good for health .. thank you Rachel!

[David Scott]

Fun story line. I found it hard to get into any rythm while reading it though.

[Muhammad Qasim]

i was trying to make the last words rhyme .. i suppose there was no proper rhythm .. Thank you!! : )

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

nice one .. awesome ending

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you!

[Muhammad Ibraheem]

mp :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

np

[dunnia]

cute poem...scolded my mum heheh your not the only one

[Muhammad Qasim]

ahem ahem .. thank you

[dunnia]

..... you already no wat im gna say :)