darkness beneath

Human's have lost all their basic principles of how to live peacefully!

The light faded

Beneath the soaring sky

The stars shining brighter than ever before

It was a silent retaliation

They wanted to rebel

Tell of their existence

That was silent

But made our lives lively

They were the knights of moon

Circling silently around

This world of evil

Wanting to rid it

But unable to do so

The overwhelming darkness

Covers the dim light

Never to be seen

By the wise eyes

In the darkness

They cry

While others Blacken their wicked souls

For all they love is evil

N all they hate is good

Turned on their very basics

Distorted principles

Of

Mental humans!!

They destroy all

And feel proud!

Reviews

[The dark story]

Nice them being penned down with nice powerful diction. Loved those dark imagery here. Nice job.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks :) for the review

[The dark story]

you're most welcome.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Your welcome is most graciously accepted :D

[The dark story]

ohohoh...thanks a tonne for the acceptance bdh :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

haha!! :P xD

[Moniba]

Very well-written! I'm impressed, it's deep, and simply told... Didn't know you had such perception! :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you for getting impressed!! and now you know of my talent :p

[Moniba]

dimagh pe mt charhaen tareef ko :P

[Muhammad Qasim]

dimagh pai tahreef ko na charhau....lgta hai aap mjhe janti nhi hai :p

[Moniba]

Well duh, how am I supposed to know you??

[Muhammad Qasim]

true!! but u can always know someone! all you need is to make a will!! : )

[RachelReaper]

REBELLION!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry... whenever I hear the word "rebel" that comes to mind

[Muhammad Qasim]

Haha .. no worriez!!

[RachelReaper]

exhibit A of the evil human race *points to self*

[Muhammad Qasim]

Okay!

[David Scott]

You are young to have such a dire perspective of humanity. However, evil has saturated the DNA of our race. It is a sad fact. I pray that the Spirit of love can heal more and more souls each day. There is a Hope! Evil is already defeated. Just be patient and keep your faith!
Great write.
Be well.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Hope is the only thing keeping us going .. and hopefully .. i'll never lose faith in humanity and i do hope that love spreads terminating all the evil!!
and Thank you!

[ms. barrie]

incredible write. very powerful, wonderfully penned. and i definitely agree - i enjoy your writing style. thank you for sharing!

[Muhammad Qasim]

THank you!! :D

[ms. barrie]

you welcome! subscribed and added to favs. - you're a very talented writer, keep writing on. ;)

[Muhammad Qasim]

i will .. thank you! :)

[ms. barrie]

good, i'm looking forward to reading more of your writings, and you welcome!

[Muhammad Qasim]

And i will be waiting for your reviews! : )

[ms. barrie]

i'm afraid they'll start to sound redundant lol, of course i would leave reviews ;)

[Muhammad Qasim]

haha .. no worrieZ for that!! it's the gesture that matter's! : )

[ms. barrie]

okay, and i agree, Namaste!

[Muhammad Qasim]

That's good!!

[ms. barrie]

:))

[Muhammad Qasim]

: )