that girl

that girl

A Poem by Muhammad Qasim
"

humans hate those who are superior!!

"

 

They saw that hideous face

..

That ugly body

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Those beastly hands

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Her grisly orange eyes

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That horrid face

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Her frightful heart

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But never they saw

..

Beneath

..

All that

Loathsome appearance

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 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

..

Beautiful

..

Refined

..

Elegant

..

Charming

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Personality of hers!!

..

And they

Destroyed her

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Without even touching!!

 

 

© 2012 Muhammad Qasim


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We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )
Anita Harris

11 Years Ago

You have a very great point. Great job :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

thanks!



Reviews

I love this! It's so true!
I love these parts especially:

"But never they saw
..
Beneath
..
All that
Loathsome appearance"

And:

"And they
Destroyed her
..
Without even touching!!"

Beautiful and inspiring job with this, thanks for sharing(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

iT was no problem and also thank you for reviewing! : )
Amandaaa Caroline (:

12 Years Ago

No problem(:
We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )
Anita Harris

11 Years Ago

You have a very great point. Great job :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

thanks!
"and they destroyed her, without even touching" was the part I, I don't know about others, could relate to the most. nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you!!
It says so much in such little words
I live the message this poem portrays
its brilliant!
great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing! : )
Amazing! This is a beautiful piece, and sadly, many times true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thanks alot for the review!
Skye

12 Years Ago

No problem :)
Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

: )
I loved the poetry here. We often destroy the most worthy out of our ignorance or hate or more often insecurities... Not sure I agree with your statement under the title as an absolute truth... Great write.
Be well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

well thank you for reviewing firstly and thanks for sharing your opinion! it means alot!
the reality and the strong points in this make it a amazing poem I honestly love every thing about this. Beautiful write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Good to know that and thanks for reviewing!
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
You make your point very clearly - I like it ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
this goes down to the physical level of sentiments ... with a tinge of reality ..
very impressive ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thanks alot for the review!
Factual Poetry! Malala Yousufzai did not deserve this. Excellent write! :) :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

hmmm .. thanks for reviewing .. but what does Malala Yousaf Zai has to do with this poetry ?
Kushal

12 Years Ago

Ohh sorry...but I thought this was about the 14 year old young girl/activist who was shot by terrori.. read more
Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Oh well .. i didn't notice that part when i wrote it .. thank you for reviewing and letting me know .. read more

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London, United Kingdom



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