that girl

humans hate those who are superior!!

 

They saw that hideous face

..

That ugly body

..

Those beastly hands

..

Her grisly orange eyes

..

That horrid face

..

Her frightful heart

..

But never they saw

..

Beneath

..

All that

Loathsome appearance

..

 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

..

Beautiful

..

Refined

..

Elegant

..

Charming

..

Personality of hers!!

..

And they

Destroyed her

..

Without even touching!!

 

 

Reviews

[Mark]

We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

[Muhammad Qasim]

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )

[Anita Harris]

You have a very great point. Great job :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

thanks!

[Brave girl]

good peom,congrats!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks :)

[Talal Hussain]

Beautiful as always :-)

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks :)

[justjenn_2u]

Yeah, I know the feeling and I feel her emotions though she was destroyed. One can take beautiful and make it ugly or make ugly beautiful. This poem touched my soul due to personal experience and touched the core of me. Awesomely written. Write on...

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you.. Our world is full of hypocritical people unknown they have the power to alter others.. just by the smallest good deed.. they can have a huge impact on the world!

[Androglossia]

Superficial people are often threatened to what they do not see. I second to what Mark said. Thought write you have on here.

[Muhammad Qasim]

well Thanks :)

[Androglossia]

thoughtful*

[Muhammad Qasim]

haha... okay!!

[Lina Grey]

that girl in your picture isn't ugly. but i love resounding truth in this. humans tend to fear, hate, destroy, conquer. everything we don't understand and everything that intimidates us. although they claim to be understanding and of "higher" intelligence, humans as a race tend to lack basic compassion and open-mindedness. Even amongst ourselves. brilliant write Qasim.

[Muhammad Qasim]

yea, the longer we live the more we come to realise that the people living along us are animals with no common sense but only a few manners imprinted in their memory, they do good deeds not because they want to.. but because they have to. i'll totally agree with you here.. and thanks for the beautiful review :)

[Lina Grey]

:) You're welcome

[Muhammad Qasim]

:)

[Mary Christabel George]

I wish all men would fall for beauty of soul & not beauty of appearance. Mankind would be so graceful. The ending was so impressing "They destroyed her without even touching ".

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thanks, and yes, i agree with you, beauty alone is of no worth, A good soul is what matters :)

[Mary Christabel George]

Exactly and you are welcome :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

because Looks deceive and thanks again for the review.. they mean a lot :)

[Mary Christabel George]

I appreciate your views that looks deceive.
:)

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a great weaved poem a round of applause for you, Mr. Qasim~!
I'm taking this to my library

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you a bunch.. Mrs. Rhianne :) it means a lot!

[Rhianne Ney]

Mrs.? Oh my gosh 0o0 since when?

[Muhammad Qasim]

ooohhh... not intentional!! miss* rhianne!! hehe

[Rhianne Ney]

:)

[junaid altaf]

so simple yet enlightening!!!!!!!!!!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank's

[junaid altaf]

not to mention......................

[Muhammad Qasim]

:)

[Natasha]

sad that people these days are so fiscated on beauty that they glance past and see the ugly--great poem and message

[Muhammad Qasim]

yea it is sad but the world is unfair and you have to adjust with it!! thanks for your review!!

[layla]

such an amazing write. I truly enjoyed this!

[Muhammad Qasim]

Thank you for reading and enjoying!! : )