that girl

that girl

A Poem by Muhammad Qasim
"

humans hate those who are superior!!

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They saw that hideous face

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That ugly body

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Those beastly hands

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Her grisly orange eyes

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That horrid face

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Her frightful heart

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But never they saw

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Beneath

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All that

Loathsome appearance

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 The

Kind hearted

Dazzlingly

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Beautiful

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Refined

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Elegant

..

Charming

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Personality of hers!!

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And they

Destroyed her

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Without even touching!!

 

 

© 2012 Muhammad Qasim


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We fear and destroy what we do not understand. Wouldn't it be grand if we all understood that we are part of each other? Connected and dependent, wouldn't that be the real beginning of humanity? Very great write here, particular impacted by the ending to destroy someone without touching.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Well thank you .. Glad you like it! : )
Anita Harris

11 Years Ago

You have a very great point. Great job :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

thanks!



Reviews

good peom,congrats!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Beautiful as always :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Yeah, I know the feeling and I feel her emotions though she was destroyed. One can take beautiful and make it ugly or make ugly beautiful. This poem touched my soul due to personal experience and touched the core of me. Awesomely written. Write on...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

Thank you.. Our world is full of hypocritical people unknown they have the power to alter others.. j.. read more
Superficial people are often threatened to what they do not see. I second to what Mark said. Thought write you have on here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

well Thanks :)
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

thoughtful*
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

haha... okay!!
that girl in your picture isn't ugly. but i love resounding truth in this. humans tend to fear, hate, destroy, conquer. everything we don't understand and everything that intimidates us. although they claim to be understanding and of "higher" intelligence, humans as a race tend to lack basic compassion and open-mindedness. Even amongst ourselves. brilliant write Qasim.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

yea, the longer we live the more we come to realise that the people living along us are animals with.. read more
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

:) You're welcome
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

:)
I wish all men would fall for beauty of soul & not beauty of appearance. Mankind would be so graceful. The ending was so impressing "They destroyed her without even touching ".

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mary Christabel George

11 Years Ago

Exactly and you are welcome :)
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

because Looks deceive and thanks again for the review.. they mean a lot :)
Mary Christabel George

11 Years Ago

I appreciate your views that looks deceive.
:)
This is a great weaved poem a round of applause for you, Mr. Qasim~!
I'm taking this to my library

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

Mrs.? Oh my gosh 0o0 since when?
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

ooohhh... not intentional!! miss* rhianne!! hehe
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

:)
so simple yet enlightening!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

Thank's
junaid altaf

11 Years Ago

not to mention......................
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

:)
sad that people these days are so fiscated on beauty that they glance past and see the ugly--great poem and message

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

yea it is sad but the world is unfair and you have to adjust with it!! thanks for your review!!
such an amazing write. I truly enjoyed this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muhammad Qasim

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and enjoying!! : )

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Added on October 27, 2012
Last Updated on November 1, 2012

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Muhammad Qasim

London, United Kingdom



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