Poor little girl

Poor little girl

A Poem by qaralynn

Poor little girl
Having your life torn to pieces
They promised you the world
Instead they gave you a corner
It made your eyes grow cold
And you've forgotten how to smile
Because you can't longer capture
The body that was once yours

I pray for you, little girl
Day and night

© 2011 qaralynn


Author's Note

qaralynn
I wrote this after reading a book about girls in slave trade (hopefully that's the right word)

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qaralynn,

Most definately a statement of intense measure. Short, powerful and packed with deep thought.

I, for one, can definately validate that a little girls tears are damaging to the soul.

I loved ths poem, you did a great job.

Have you thought of entering this into Poetic Infusion Society; Dark Secrets Contest?

Have a great day,

Legacy

Posted 13 Years Ago


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haay everyone, I'm a dutch teenage girl (so please don't mind my bad english) I mostly write to clear my head, because somehow i just can't stop thinking.. XD I like meeting new people.. Feel fr.. more..

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