Because you can't

Because you can't

A Poem by qaralynn

You say you know everything
still the questions about me remain unanswered
because you don't know me
 
You say you can fix everyone
still I remain broken
because you can't fix me

You say you will catch us when we fall
still I'm crashing down
because you can't catch me

You say you can make everyone talk
still my story remains untold
because you can't reach me

You say you can be with me
still I remain alone
because it's pretty clear
that you and I can never be

© 2010 qaralynn


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This is a very well expressed poem. The disappointment is very evident.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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You said not to mind your bad English, but there isn't any! Your English is perfect! Better than my French at least... God... lol
I loved this! It's amazing! I can't... I can't really explain why, but I really enjoyed this. It's amazing.
Great write; great read!

Posted 14 Years Ago


A well expressed poem. Frustration of dissapointment, when some people think they can understand you but they never truly try. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


At the beginning of the poem I didn't really understand what was going on. But once I reached the ending I really understood. I love this poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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haay everyone, I'm a dutch teenage girl (so please don't mind my bad english) I mostly write to clear my head, because somehow i just can't stop thinking.. XD I like meeting new people.. Feel fr.. more..

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