Her eyes

Her eyes

A Poem by qaralynn

the happiness
in her eyes
had faded away
as the years
had grown older

hatred and anger
had destroyed everything
leaving behind
a deep bitterness

© 2010 qaralynn


Author's Note

qaralynn
never let hate or anger turn into bitterness

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for some reason i thought of a mother growing old with two rotten children (not that all children are rotten) or someone who had grown old and all their hopes and dreams were shattered. Does ask me but thats what i got (a) i like it :) and i love how a lot of your writing has meaning to it. Well done yet again :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


outstanding ink. this can happen to anyone. thanks for the truth and wisdom

Posted 14 Years Ago



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haay everyone, I'm a dutch teenage girl (so please don't mind my bad english) I mostly write to clear my head, because somehow i just can't stop thinking.. XD I like meeting new people.. Feel fr.. more..

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