Can't find the right words

i tried to write something down

but i ended up throwing stuff at the walls

i couldn't find the right words

and i got so mad

 

i burned all the pages in front of me

it shouldn't be written down

and i shouldn't even try!

i have to find the right words first..

 

But i just can't find them!!

 

Author's Note

ahem..i was pretty mad when i wrote this down

Reviews

[Joe]

I sometimes have a hard time finding the right words as a writer, as well. It's important not to give up. By the way, your poems have a unique style, that are short and to the point. It's really important to keep trying as a writer, because the line, "and I shouldn't even try!," although conveys the message of frustration for this poem, shows that you get frustrated to the point of sometimes forgetting your talent as a writer. Keep at it, and don't give up.

[the one who destructs e..]

you found them

[Lizzy]

I think you found the right words! I really like the style of this poem.

[J.E. Stroud]

I like the simplicity that expresses your emotions

[Justin D]

ahh so i must admit this one is a slight issue most writers face.
I guess to say, writers block sucks horribly haha.
but it is definitely true, finding the right words to express your feelings in the most obvious/effective ways can be tough. but keep it up. Your writing keeps me interested :)

[Tate Morgan]

LOL I DO THAT TOO AND IT IS A GOOD THING
TRy to think of a happy thought writ3e it down throw the words up in the air and rearange them

[Dreamer (Kristen)]

found the right words yet? it was actually a good write, Had a lot of emotions.....