Words from the Chair

I am quite comfortable

Quiet the racket for just a moment

Let me use my words

Sorry and thank you and

Blah blah blah

Why don’t you stop wasting everyone’s time

And turn on the toaster.

Reviews

[Corset]

lol, i'm not sure how this one effects me, it makes me feel like shutting up , sitting down or getting you a beer. lol.

[Paul R. Watson]

haha idk if thats what i was trying to say but i would take you up on the bevarage

[nigrum homonculus]

could imagine my dad saying words like this. made me chuckle slightly

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. Need to turn on the coffee and cook some eggs too. Good to be comfortable and have peace and quiet. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[allie_arrowz]

i liked reading this. you should make it longer so i have more to read!
;)

[CHRIS ANDES]

great view of a memory I guess
=]

[eglantine]

...interesting diction and syntax. I think I'd play around with structure more--could really further this poem.

[Paul R. Watson]

Thanks for your review!

[Pencrafter]

This paints a scene of everyday life from the kitchen in many homes. It would have a little more smoothness if the sarcastic line about wasting everyone's time was eliminated or at least shortened. Your poem is certainly different.

[Paul R. Watson]

How did you come to the conclusion that it takes place in a kitchen? Are you sure?

[Pencrafter]

The kitchen is the most frequent gathering place for family discussions; plus the reference to the toaster.

[afra]

hahahah