Exit

                  

                                 here?

                           to

                     up               

               it

    Had 

 

                                     Exit out a door sometime

                                     and smile because you've left

                                     Don't look back or turn around

                                     or sell your perfect theft. 

Reviews

[Listmaker]

I'm smiling as I read this.

[paul sal.....]

why?...................................

[Listmaker]

Because it is a happy poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she stole my heart and reversed my logic on love...

never saw the theft happening...she was magic...

i like the staircase effect of the first stanza, fits the theme so well.

[m.s.early]

As genious as it is concise

[paul sal.....]

was hoping someone could relate