Lonley

Lonley

A Poem by paul sal.....
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inspired by a poem by barbara gilmore

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                                          Lonley
                                          Is a place
                                          With lots
                                          Of locked doors 
                                          but...
                                          Their is always
                                           One, left ajar
                                           open it............ 

© 2014 paul sal.....


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Short but Profound. I thought that even thought I felt alone and so lonely at times, I always knew something or someone is still there left for me to open. I like it, Paul. Thanks for sharing a great message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write with deep message, well done paul, take care

Posted 10 Years Ago


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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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