Some Straws Are Worth Grasping

Some Straws Are Worth Grasping

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                                  Strolling through life on a cobblestone road
                                                  avoiding the strife and the things I've been told
                                                  it has been an awkward journey along the way
                                                  it is hard to believe what the knowing have to say
                                                  ambivalence is the key on this spring time day
                                                  because i am hearing suggestions I palinode
                                                  while i am more interested in the back streets of Kozhikode
                                                  I talk of peace as if Gandhi never utterd a word
                                                  because it is time,this time, for peace; don't you know? 
                                                  I am grasping at straws, that's what they say
                                                  I'm just wasting my time, putting on a show
                                                  but they don't know where I have been
                                                  they don't know what I know
                                                  I am tired of them asking
                                                  All I know is,
                                                  Some straws are worth grasping.    

© 2014 paul sal.....


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ambivalence is the key on this spring time day
because I am hearing suggestions I palinode
Excellent write, ambivalence, open mindedness, accommodation all are valid and relevant strategies, some straws are worth grasping without any doubt, agree with poet, proud of the poem as well as poet, thanks for sharing


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yes everyone we meet knows something we don't know and everyone is "strolling through life on a cobblestone road" good write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Grasping straws and acknowledging the risk, yet going onwards to grasp more straws if that means peace can be maintained. Well done, paul, keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ambivalence is the key on this spring time day
because I am hearing suggestions I palinode
Excellent write, ambivalence, open mindedness, accommodation all are valid and relevant strategies, some straws are worth grasping without any doubt, agree with poet, proud of the poem as well as poet, thanks for sharing


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work my friend, keep coming...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming i can't wait to read more

Posted 10 Years Ago


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paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

thank you, I will try
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome

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paul sal.....

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