Sail

                                                 Sail into the wind upon times ocean,

                                                 teaming with life as your ark

                                                 searches for a place to land,

                                                 knowing not what will greet you

                                                 when you offer your hand.

                                                 Only time will tell you 

                                                 what the outcome will be,

                                                 only common sense will tell

                                                 if time was well spent at sea.

                                                 The clock may tell you something

                                                 if it ticks in symmetry,

                                                 hold the hand of time

                                                 for it may well hold

                                                 your destiny.         

Author's Note

all we really have is time and it is a big vessel.........

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

the connection of time to the vastness of the ocean..wonderful...this is a gorgeous piece, greatly enjoyed.

[paul sal.....]

thank you k

[Dee]

I love this....your poetry is so timely for us at this stage in our lives....
VERY WELL WRITTEN !

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is absolutely amazing! :]

[paul sal.....]

I am blushing, thank you

[Frontier]

I like the theme and how you relate time as a vessel in the sea. Nice flow as well. Keep it up!

[paul sal.....]

thank you, out on the Frontier

[Kimberlee]

This is a beautiful poem that has a lovely execution to it.

[paul sal.....]

thank you, bumble

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully done...wish I could stop the hands of time, enjoyed :) x

[paul sal.....]

thank you tia

[Linda alexander]

hold the hand of time
for it may well hold
your destiny.
So relevant topic, very useful if you taken in to account, enjoyed, take care

[paul sal.....]

thank you linda, what part of the world are you from?

[Linda alexander]

You welcome, take care my friend

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

I like this poem, trust the hands of time rather than that of another very wise words, beautifully written :)

[paul sal.....]

Thank you, Ally