We all need some

We all need some

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                                Someday the world will be as one
                                                Sometime the clocks won't have to be wound
                                                Someway the fighting will all be done
                                                Something tells me, love will be found. 

© 2014 paul sal.....


Author's Note

paul sal.....
if only

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Someday... I like the style and message of this short piece, Paul.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Echo..if only...lets hope so :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

me to..........
if only
Hopes are great, but man has to broaden his mind to compromise, forgive, tolerate, appreciate, enjoy, watch others back too, and so much compassion, excellent write, deep and powerful message, thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

your reviews are always more deep and powerful than my writing...........
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the complement, dear poet, you made me humble, take care
This is a nice piece of work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

Hoping that's not a derogatory statement,.................others to see
mendedwords

10 Years Ago

Not at all this was the first poem I read.

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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