A Regret

A Regret

A Poem by paul sal.....

                                      Surprised to learn you are still on my mind
                                      It's hard to understand feelings of this kind.

                                      It's a lonely life, this life I lead and
                                      and some times I find
                                      within my own greed
                                      you are the only one
                                      the only one I need.

                                      I then curse my self
                                      and the actions I take
                                      and recall your quiet beauty
                                      beside a silver lake and
                                      glancing towards heaven
                                      with each new passing day
                                      I find myself in wonder
                                      because I've let you fly away.   

© 2014 paul sal.....


Author's Note

paul sal.....
oh well

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Surprised to learn you are sill on my mind
It's hard to understand feelings of this kind. I find myself in wonder
because I've let you fly away.
Really great write, the emotions and current state of poet is expressed and there is a regret hiding as poet allowed to fly the person away, many will relate to this poem, no true answers why we let that person fly away, I may say because we are more bonded to strings and bonds of our limitations, which is quite natural for the poet to agree or disagree, really enjoyed



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

Sort of sad that many will relate, where are our heads? Thank you for kind words, Linda
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

you welcome, take care, we are humans so fragile and with limitations



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I could relate to this piece..beautifully somber, enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

Thank you, somber is an emotion a step lower than melancholy ........... which is accurately describ.. read more
Surprised to learn you are sill on my mind
It's hard to understand feelings of this kind. I find myself in wonder
because I've let you fly away.
Really great write, the emotions and current state of poet is expressed and there is a regret hiding as poet allowed to fly the person away, many will relate to this poem, no true answers why we let that person fly away, I may say because we are more bonded to strings and bonds of our limitations, which is quite natural for the poet to agree or disagree, really enjoyed



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

paul sal.....

10 Years Ago

Sort of sad that many will relate, where are our heads? Thank you for kind words, Linda
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

you welcome, take care, we are humans so fragile and with limitations

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paul sal.....
paul sal.....

Brentwood, NY



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Just a simple human wondering why we live in such turmoil and working in a small way to make it better....I like cats stevens, mozaart, neil young, beethoven, harry chapin, ernest chausson, passenger,.. more..

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