A good hair day

got me

                                        I've got ...the sunshine in my pocket

                                        And a beer in my sock

                                        A few bucks in the till

                                        And I'm ready to dock

                                        So...move over waves

                                        And see you later rain 

                                        For today's the day to wake up

                                        Because I'm feeling no pain.

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Interesting and great write, feelings are expressed in an intrigue and clever way, poet says pain is vanished, and the day is already welcoming him and he is fully ready for the sunny day without rain, and docking and moving over waves, best of luck for the best days of life which is only made for you

[paul sal.....]

Thank you!; are you ready for "A bad hair day"?

[Linda alexander]

Yes, friend ready for the poem A bad hair day

[Dee]

I love this....very sweet & simple....anyone can relate due to light & pain being a part of us all.....

[paul sal.....]

DEE; are you ready for A bad hair "day"?

[Dhaye]

It's not always a bad hair day...LOL
Concise but true and speaks volume. A clever piece!

[Barbara Gilmer]

what a fun read. love those days off or non work days, don't you?!! great write. Barbara

[Listmaker]

A seemingly innocent little poem but pretty heavy. Feeling no pain because of self-medication? Is this the only way the character in this poem can face the day?

[paul sal.....]

I guess you could say its a sometimes sort of thing but its not necessarily drugs, emotionality produces highs and lows .........

[Listmaker]

Very true.

[Tai Ryens]

Drinking the pain away? Waking up numb? Either way, or any way, you've done a clever task in hiding painful feelings beneath the facade of sunshine words.

[paul sal.....]

thank you for reading my little poem, some days are sunny, some are cloudy, the rest are just days.....