The needle

                                         The threads of our existence 

                                       work tirelessly towards the needle 

                                       of life.

                                         Seeking, always seeking it's gateway.

                                       A threshold through which and with

                                      which, the uneven seams of our humanity

                                      can finally be sown into perfection.

                                        The eye is more attainable than we think.

                                      Worry not about the size of the stitch,

                                      a bigger heart will always find the way.

      

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Intriguing piece here, looking upon our existence as a thread and life as the wool, and I take the heart as a metaphor for the amount of thread on a spool (or whatsoever holds the yarn). Mistakes can be made in stitching but a really lovely design will fix it, well done.

[Listmaker]

This one is more uplifting. I like it cause it speaks of a struggle but optimism for finding ones' way in life.

[paul sal.....]

thanks for taking part in my world...............

[Listmaker]

You are welcome.

[Linda alexander]

Great write, impressed, deep and hope and dream is promised, really enjoyed