kittens

                                           Kittens purr with joy's sweet song

                                           while lying on your lap

                                           It is an unselfish  bliss they give to you

                                           while all they do is nap.

Reviews

[Listmaker]

Sweet poem. A different write for you. The kittens are unknowingly giving joy -- maybe the best kind of giving. But it is the lap's owner who decides to be open to the joy that is there for the taking. Thanks for this one. Should joys in first line be joy's?

[paul sal.....]

thank you! and yes commas and such do drive me crazy on occasion. IT is not so different from how I feel, life should and could be simple but.......................

[Listmaker]

It's the simple things in life that bring the most pleasure. However, when depressed, it is hard to see this truth.

[Linda alexander]

A great write, great observation, when the infant smiles when they nap, it is so heart filling, at times they laugh loud, lift their head, and go back to sleep, only thing you need to fill your heart when it happens, enjoyed