Ice and Winter

please please

                                        Ice and Winter

                                        Your time,this time

                                        Is at an end.

                                        The birth of Spring is sitting 

                                        atop your crest and it is time

                                        for you to move aside, for

                                        fighting Springs' advent

                                        is a useless endeavor.

                                        Slumber for now

                                        Your time will come again.

                     

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Slumber for now
Your time will come again.
If there is hill there is a valley, our winter is almost at the end, yes now winter needs to slumber for sure, fully agree with the poet, glad some one said that so firmly, ready for spring in every sense, enjoyed, before the next winter of life comes, wish to be off stage, so next winter for someone or none, enjoyed

[paul sal.....]

thank you and goodbye winter solstice see you next year

[Linda alexander]

No the life winter after my death, not ready for any more winter for sure, let this spring stay forever, do not care I do not have summers even, take care

[paul sal.....]

Linda, life is winter spring summer fall winter spring summer fall winter spring summer and fall; it is the cycle of life until it stops,...............and then it is Spring

[Linda alexander]

So dear poet, I do not want to welcome winter, it did not ask my permission to stay this long with me, so going to have a spring garden within my soul and just believe no more winter, I will try for sure, can go to denial state or become rebellious like teen, not doing that, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Your words spring with beauty and the farewell of winter...Frozen water will flow again for all...:)..........

[paul sal.....]

Yes indeed, thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Tai Ryens]

I particularly like the way you speak of the end without fear nor joy, just neutrality. It adds another whole segment to the spectrum of emotions felt when you spoke of the end, of which I first perceived as nods to the death of one and the thriving of another; although that might simply be cause of my general outlooks on life itself. This was calming, like telling a child to rest.

[paul sal.....]

Thank you for the perceptive observation and for replying to my request. We all need some peaceful rest now and then. Spring time is the return of life, it's best to reach for the sun than to descend into darkness. Plant a seed......nurture the flower........

[m.s.early]

I am soooo done with winter too... Slumber now oh winter

[paul sal.....]

thank you and thank for responding to my request